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Her temple sacked and her city burning, she prayed to her god Apollo for salvation. As her mother burned and her father lay bruised and beaten she prayed for reprieve, and as she was carried away by a great warrior wielding a spear, Agamemnon his soldiers called him, she prayed for revenge. She prayed Apollo might bless her with the power to curse the Greeks who had razed her home. As they carried her away in binds she swore that she would have her revenge upon the armies of Greece and as she swore Apollo heard her, and turned his gaze upon her. As she sat in binds, waiting while the warriors of Greece argued her fate, he blessed her, and she slipped from her ties and stole silently away, but although she was free, she refused to forget. For their crimes she cast upon them a dreaded curse. And all her sisters wronged, taken also in chains, heard her curse and cast their own, and Apollo heard them too, and in his prophecy he promised that the Greeks would lament their crimes. And as he spoke the words they were so, that the Greeks must lose their most precious warriors, that those who did not fall in battle would face their greatest woe upon their return home. None may leave unscathed save Helen and her husband. Granted protection by Hera, all the curses of women could not harm them, nor could they reverse the fate that was of Troy to fall, but little interest did they have in the fate of Troy. To make the Greeks suffer would be vengeance enough.
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And the god of pestilence did sow like disease discord between the Greek warriors of Greece, and as the great Achilles departed, insulted by the Greek general Agamemnon, the tide turned against the armies of Menelaus. As their armies fell they retreated, but only briefly, and they begged Achilles' return. But Achilles' grudge ran deep, biting like flies they nagged him and he could not return, and in his place came the great Patroclus. Most loved of Achilles, he took up his arms and rushed against the armies of Troy and he did slay a great many of their warriors but the Trojan hero Hector saw through his disguise and, emboldened by his discovery slew him. And the tide turned once again against the Greeks as the competing curses of every wronged woman fought and mingled, bringing blood and strife to the great war. When Achilles heard of his fallen Patroclus he rallied himself, burning away his grudge in a fever and setting upon the Trojans like a wolf. Round and round the city he pursued the villian Hector until Athena, bade by Helen and her patron Hera, tricked him and brought the two face to face. And Achilles, greatest warrior of Greece killed the hero Hector, but in doing so cemented his own untimely death as the curse of those he wronged sealed his death with the fates.
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For ten long years the armies of Menelaus laid siege to the city of Troy and Helen, still trapped inside, had her revenge for all those inside suffered until, at last, they succumbed to the treachery of the Greeks. Believing they had won, they accepted the parting gift of Greece, the terrible Trojan Horse, holding a great number of the armies of Agamemnon, and in the night they stole from the horse and opened the city gates and set upon it, burning all in their path, taking what they could and stealing back their long sought after Helen. They killed the kidnapper Paris and set fire to the city, and, in keeping with the prayers of Helen and blessing of Hera, they returned her safe to her home and her husband. But although the war was over, the curse of Apollo was far from done. Achilles had succumbed to the arrows of Paris before the war was finished and he rested in the afterlife with Patroclus. Agamemnon was soon to join them as he returned home to his city and his wife Clytemnestra with yet another captive, another devotee of Apollo the priestess Cassandra. Betrayed and killed by his wife and her new lover he would soon find himself among the dead as well. Only Odysseus, beloved of Athena, would not meet his fate so soon, but would be carried about, on a ten year long voyage home, seeing not his family or his city until then and only after great hardship. Only Helen and Menelaus led a blessed life after the war. At great cost she had returned to her home and, as bade, Troy and Paris had fallen. With so many dead, the age of Heros of Greece ended and life carried on, as it always had.
Author's note: This is a long one but then again the Iliad is long. I decided to write this from the perspective of the various women who were wronged throughout the myth of the Trojan War. I believe Helen was not actually that much of a victim in the original myth and went willingly with Paris but I needed a motivation for her curses. The women here are shown as the actual catalysts behind the action in the Trojan war, moving the men about more like chess pieces rather than actually fighting. I would have played out the angle of the chess game more but I only had so much room to write. I had fun giving the women of Greece more agency and importance in the story than the original myth which showed them more as toys for the men to fight over.
Story Source: The Iliad, retold by Alfred J. Church
Danica, I love the fact that you chose to write your story from the women who wronged perspective. You have a beautiful writing style. The details described in your writing allowed me as the reader to take the adventure alongside each character. The picture you added of the Greek witch was very fitting. Your writing carried the story along and I could tell the story was coming to its conclusion, the fall of Troy and with him Paris. I look forward to reading more of your writing throughout the semester.
ReplyDeleteYour writing is amazing and very intriguing... I felt myself being drawn into what you were saying. The photo you picked could not have gone along more nicely. From the very first sentence, I was hooked to the story and the page breaks you included made the transitions made even more smooth.
ReplyDeleteWhat caught my eye in the beginning was your writing style. The perspective you chose was very appealing not just to me but more probably every reader. I felt that I was inside your story and I was able to reimagine your characters perfectly. Your picture was very intriguing and I believe it was a great choice for this post. Thanks for sharing and I am looking forward to read more of your stories.
ReplyDeleteDanica, I love your writing style and your choice of characters and development in the stories. I was very impressed with your inspiration and ability to dive into the myths and create new aspects of the stories where the women, who are most often given minor roles, become the primary cause of all the death and strife. I wonder how you would have developed the story if Hera was unable to protect Helen and her husband from the priestess of Apollo's curse, or maybe if Cassandra killed Agamemnon causing Clytemnestra to curse the Greeks and the story continues with more curses and strife. I think that is the great thing about this class and your story, even when the story is as well-thought out and developed as yours, there are still other possible routes that can be taken.
ReplyDeleteThe whole time reading your story, I was completely engaged and I wanted more when I got to the end of it.
Wow! Your story is very well-written. I am very impressed with your creativity in this story. My first shocking moment was you created Helen as a victim of Paris’s lust for her beauty, and yet, she is still persisted with her dream to come home to her husband. I have never thought of Helen this way. My other impression on your story is how each woman’s curse fits well in the whole story. This really explains why most of the heroes died, and you also give a good reason why Odysseus is temporarily saved from his fate. I am just curious about who is the second witch in the story. If she is related with the Troy’s royal family, why isn’t she angry with Paris? It’s true that the Greeks destroyed her home, but it is Paris to start this war because of his selfishness. I feel like some of Paris’s family members should be vengeful against Paris for being destruction to their home and happiness. Someone likes Hector’s wife. Can she be your fourth witch? At the end, your story is very captivating. I hope you will continue to Odysseus.
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