The world is full of stories but only a few are on my shelf. The history of the world is etched in the stars and the stones and the papers in my bedroom. Let's pull down the stars, and smash the stones, and rewrite history.
Monday, August 22, 2016
Comment Wall
Constructive comments are welcome! Kind comments are preferred!
Hey Danica! I wanted to start out by commenting on your layout. Your background is great, subtle enough so that it adds to the blog, not take away from it. Your picked a great font, easy to read and looks organized. The only thing I would suggest it changing the font color for your story body. It goes well with your color scheme but it is a bit difficult to read. Also, it might be a good idea to add a space between the paragraphs in the story, A Warning of the Shadows, like you did in your other story so that way it does not feel too crowded. One other thing I would suggest is make the Author's note font size bigger, it is even harder to read. As for the writing itself, you did an awesome job. It flowed really well and there are not any mistakes that I caught. Great job!
Hey Danica, I was assigned this your portfolio again but I've already read all of your stories and there's nothing really that I would change from my comments last time. Great job!
Hey Danica! I wanted to start out by commenting on your layout. Your background is great, subtle enough so that it adds to the blog, not take away from it. Your picked a great font, easy to read and looks organized. The only thing I would suggest it changing the font color for your story body. It goes well with your color scheme but it is a bit difficult to read. Also, it might be a good idea to add a space between the paragraphs in the story, A Warning of the Shadows, like you did in your other story so that way it does not feel too crowded. One other thing I would suggest is make the Author's note font size bigger, it is even harder to read. As for the writing itself, you did an awesome job. It flowed really well and there are not any mistakes that I caught. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHey Danica, I was assigned this your portfolio again but I've already read all of your stories and there's nothing really that I would change from my comments last time. Great job!
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